Hey everyone who reads this, my name is Smoksya and i just started a mine craft series, which it isn't a lets play, its just me playing, my first timer sort of . I lack views and subscribers, and i am in no way demanding "GO WATCH N SUB" no, but if you got a minute, check it out, and what i am asking is give me some advice in my video, what i can improve on, the way i talk, my jokes, anything will help greatly!
Heres a link to my channel, hope you guys spare a minute 
http://www.youtube.c...ya?feature=mhee

Cheers, and have an awesome day