Clan News #7 Topic: !Lot News!
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gatenkaasbroek
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Hello this time we have lot news in edition #7!

The first news is:
Maxi said the building in his realm not for JBI but
he was mean to WRN and wanna say sory to WRN
but he also said we are still in !WAR!
The next news is Sonardo has found a clan named : Elite Builders #8
The next news is Chaos Acolytes leader : Mellcor is in the top #20 now!
Well done Mellcor :)

This was the news hope to see you in edition #8
Remember: Edition#10 is Anniversary Edition!

Andreyloos2
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Now, let me finally reply...

Well hello there,

I just want to say some things, to help ye along.

First off: Get yer English sorted out, it is quite bad...

And I also want to say to ye mate, how you are writing is quite boring to read....

For example:

"The next news is Sonardo has found a clan named : Elite Builders #8
The next news is Chaos Acolytes leader : Mellcor is in the top #20 now!"
 
And last but not least: Get some better stories to write about...
Maybe it's only me, but I don't want to read about clan placements and new clans, I can search that up myself if I need to.
 
Well, there you have it.
I replied, gave you some feedback.
I hope you don't take it too personal, as I just want to help ye.
 
Andreyloos2

 

shnaw
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gatenkaasbroek im gonna ask

gatenkaasbroek im gonna ask you again to please only use 1 topic and not create a new one each time for the clan news.

ranger10700
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I personally think this is a

I personally think this is a great idea, but what shnaw said.

I also want to be able to read the news without tearing my eyes out to so many grammar and spelling mistakes.

naufalrasyid
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Put it in a single thread!

Put this stupid clan news in a single thread! A staff has just warned you!

maxi9030
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gaten please do what shnaw says

Gaten please put it in single thread you got warned by a staff if you dont it will be harder to get co-leader

gatenkaasbroek
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ITS IN ONE TOPIC NOW!

ITS IN ONE TOPIC NOW!