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That's right.
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I have to say, that "haiku" was tres disappointing.
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Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don't make sense
Refridgerator
No wait... I already have alpha...
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Creepers follow me
The sound of them makes me cringe
Oh no!! ssssssssssSSSSS, BOOM!
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A soft white pixel..
That tumbles up, and down again.
MineCraft's Winter snow.
Thanks for reading.
Good luck to all.
And for those that don't know:
"A haiku is a non-rhymed verse genre.There are 5 syllables in the first
sentence, 7 in the second and 5 again in the last sentence."
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Dynamite is fun
Blowing up the mountains too
Enjoy this Haiku.
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Oh wait on the subject of Minecraft...
Haiku are easy
But some times they can be cruel
Creeper explosion
Except I still already have Alpha. I think I'm doing this wrong.
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I walk through the cave
The creepers are coming now
I think I am scared
My minecraft username is Atron
KTHNX
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Oh god creeper
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Oh god cree-per 4
Haikus go 5-7-5, not 4-7-1.
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The tnt goes boom, bye.
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The t-n-t goes boom, bye. 7
The cree-pers yell in a-gon-y. 8
Haikus go 5-7-5 not 7-8-5.
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Wait, Hyperion...
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Whos Jamie Lloyd?
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Oh I wish I was
Riding a dragon right now
Oh god damn you Notch
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Good. Winner so far is MVP.
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A soft white pix-el.. 5
That tum-bles up, and down a-gain. 8
Mine-Craft-'s Win-ter snow. 5
Haikus go 5-7-5, not 5 - 8 - 5.
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congratulation MVP
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yeah it was a really good haiku
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Haikus go 5-7-5 not 5-6-5
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fixed version
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Adamantine mine
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Hippopotamus
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Flooding my new mine,
Riding pigs across the land,
How I love Minecraft.
Minecraft username: kittyinabottle
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i almost forgot my minecraft user name is hyperion
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dud... you...are...retarded
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I build something big
The op says it is cool
Now i get a rank.
I did that one because i like to freebuild and would sure like to have lots of options...
Are you like gonna transfer it to the winner his paypal or do it another way?
Thanks for reading :D
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Building a tower
Takes a long time without hacks.
I say, "Fly you fools!"
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play minecraft classic
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Lawl. Invisible...
I guess I'll try again.
I think I should win
So you will buy me the game
Or I will go cry
It is Minecraft related :D
My username is Atron.
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Red in the darkness
Hungry eyes, staring at me
Watching and waiting
Little fluffy sheep
Splashing around in the sea
Don't drown, little sheep
I overshot it
Smashed one square too many
Here comes the lava
(For fun, already have the Alpha)
Edit: I quite like Bluewood's second one.
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The pig suffered.
I told him not to jump, but...
He did not listen.
Based on a true history.
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I have two:
I hate the music
It is way too sad for me
It doesn't sound good
And:
When I play Minecraft
I like to build many castles
And then they get griefed
Again, my username is Atron.
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Bluewood is in the lead.
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suddenly it is
another one
then it just explodes
by the way, my ingame username is Fran
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I hear the music.
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Curse the forum space, yea. Thread is now about creepers.
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Bookcases in the air
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Minecraft is Awesome
I Like Building Block By Block
Just Because I Can
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Trees whisper in wind
As if telling a secret
I want to join them.
_____________________________________________
I am writing this
So that you will get your wish
And I Will Get Points
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Leaving the forest
Will it cure this addiction?
I can sleep later.
- - -
My masterpiece gone
Weeks of building, and for what?
Thought he was a griefer.
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Bluewood is the in the lead? His third lines have six syllables, not seven.
I should quit for now
Oh wait, but I can build here!
I can sleep later.
- - -
My masterpiece gone
Weeks of building, and for what?
Knew he was a griefer.
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Greg, it was just that one. But thanks for proofreading, anywho.
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You guys who are making a huge deal out of syllable count:
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Oh, so if you were judging an essay contest, you wouldn't take off points for grammar?
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It depends on whether I would be testing for grammatical know-how, or if I'm interested in the underlying story.
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Well, it wasn't really an analogy as I wasn't comparing anything. But yes, I do care more about content than structure.
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Relaxation:
The sun burns fire
Minecraft's oceans pulse with foam waves.
Sand crawls up the shore.
Arrow:
Solo, they beat in flight.
Howling wind against feather.
Slice their target's flesh.
Zombies:
At dusk in the plains..
The crazed beasts practice their grunts
Killing melodies
Thanks for reading. I am desperate for Alpha. :D
Good luck to all.
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Yoda haiku likes.
Started it I think he did.
The farce be with you.
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Username: Blznferno
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Not bad yerself, Mvp.
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Sorry for all that, forums messed up. :\
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Digging a Tunnel
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The last stone is set
As rain fills the moat below.
Undead approaching.
the sky filled with memes
anime sprites disappoint
time to disconnect
the cavern complete
one whack with the pick-axe left
Oh God it's a flood
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One block starts a dream
More blocks can make it come true
Make your dream appear
I hope you like it.
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What is this blocky world,
So simple yet wonderfull,
It is Minecraft.
Here goes...I hope I'll win, but then again I probably won't. Whoever wins, congratulations to them for making a good haiku.
If i win, i'd like the account to be named TheCroat
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I'm pretty sure you make the account, and he sends the gift. :3
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I will not surrender to you, Bluewood. I refuse to give in to that adorable avatar.
Harvest Night:
Pig walks into sty
Sleeping cows in the pastures
No sleep for builder
Griefers Anthem:
break all of those blocks
get as many as you can
hope you don't get banned
A Brand New World:
The tile is pushed down
A new world has been unleashed
One more sale added
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OK here is my entry.
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A block fits in place
The music picks up again
My dwelling is done
I hope my submission isn't too late, I do so enjoy writing haikus.
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Castle is prepared
for an onslaught of griefers.
"Draw the banhammers!"
Just one more structure
one more grand palace until
admins promote me
Guests whine for more time
one begging for a third chance
surely God hates guests
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I'm in this deep cave
Behind me I hear footsteps
There's only one way out...
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Bluewood, you win. What is the information of your account?
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Aww man T_T.....anyways congrats Bluewood on wining :)
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He's the best fighter
Unparalleled lightsaber
Wars not make one great
Impossible task
Do or don't there is no try
I don't believe you
Perilous mission
Dark Side covers everything
Kick Count Dooku's ass
Too old to begin
training of young Skywalker
But teach him, I must.
Not our only hope
There's another Skywalker
A sister there is.
My size matters not
The Force: Powerful ally
Strong Jedi am I.
Judge me by my size?
Luminous beings are we
Not this crude matter
Levitate I can
any object I wish
Even an X-Wing
Talk backwards I do
confuse many opponant
Know why, no one does.
Username: Blznferno
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Because that is totally original material, right there.
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ionno these wont go in little sections they are all spread out 0.o even tho i put spaces between them
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My Minecraft username is Bluewood, if that's what you're asking.
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Congrats Bluewood on the win! Have fun on Minecraft Alpha! It is really good
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All right, done up and paid for. Once again, congratulations. Look forward to another contest later on, guys! Until then, keep Minecraftin' 8)
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I already have premium and there's already a winner, but mine's good too:
WoM Coins: 0
hi,i will appreciate it if u gift it to me :D...my parents dnt want i spend on online game and i'am to young for make a paypal