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Sorry in advance for advertising, but hear me out. I am new to the youtube business and have one video posted already. I would like for you to give me criticism but not hate. Tell me what I did wrong so I can fix it in the next videos.
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I think its ok but be a little louder dont be shy. And keep it up.
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Thanks! You guys are a lot nicer then I than I thought!
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Well I use tutorials via youtube religiously, so I duly appreciate people doing these sorts of things, and I think you have some potential, just remember, you're making a video, so don't just record, put some production quality into it.
http://www.good-tutorials.com has a lot of good things to help with graphics and software usage to show you how to make some cool stuff...
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Check out my channel I will be making more videos but for now check out video1 GHOST CART a cart that goes with out and rails .
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A few critiques:
1. Plan ahead everything you're going to do, and rehearse what you're going to say.
2. Work out any kinks first before you make the video. The switch that surprised you by activating the door, is being powered by the redstone behind it leading to the circuit.
3. Get a mod that will allow making it bright or day so you don't have to place torches before you build
4. Also, show how to build it in one part, and already have your example built in another part...